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Holly - OCT Audition Ref by Blue-Graphite Holly - OCT Audition Ref by Blue-Graphite
.:EDIT:.
New reference pic 'cause the other made her look too old.

Name:
Holly (Alias: Li)

Breed Base:
Kromfohrländer

Age:
1 year.

Gender:
Female

Abilities:
-Jumps precisely 10 feet in the air (this is also a disadvantage when dealing with shorter/smaller enemies as she can't go a millimeter higher or lower than 10 feet).

Strengths:
-Small size makes it easy to dodge attacks
-Strong legs/paws
-Thick skull
-Strong jaws

Weaknesses:
-Jumping ability
-Poor agility
-Claws are useless (dull and she prefers not to use them),
-Partially blind (can't see out of her left eye)

Personality:
-Pessimistic
-Easily holds grudges against people she first meets
-Judgmental
-Obedient
-Reliable
-Friendly towards close friends

History:
Li has lived alone since day one. She left her home, in Germany, when she sees that her siblings are 'savages' and not as dignified as she is. Crossing the border into Belarus, Li lived there for a few months before moving to Ukraine. The town of Pripyat appealed to her as a peaceful town so she settled there, with no knowledge of the nuclear incident.

Likes:
-Peace and quiet 'proper' personalities
-Cleanliness
-Being left alone
-Music (preferably rock or something loud)

Dislikes:
-Being left behind/out
-Babysitting
-Noise
-Anything dirty (mud/ink/etc.)
-Doing things wrong

Other:
-Li's OCD with pride and dignity. If anyone is improper and such, Li won't hesitate to slap some sense into them.
-If anyone gets on her bad side, Li can cuss/lecture the crap out of anyone.
-Although, Li is often refined, she can still act like a body guard for RJ at times.
-Despite being German, Li inherited an English accent from her grandmother.

Audition ref for :iconchernobyl-curs: :D

I hope nothing's wrong D: It's a little half-ass'd 'cause I've been really busy. I hope it's okay though ^^;
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lunawaterwolf Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student Digital Artist
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF NOW I HAVE TO ADD HOLLY TO THE DRAWING ANS HAD THE PAW MARK AND BLARG.

Cute though. c:
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Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Student Writer
More tiny dogs! Yay!
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Jekal Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I spy holly marking on her butt XD
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AmiliaLongTail Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What a dashing pup.

Best of luck to you!
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alrighty, this is a significant improvement. Just a few things we need to clarify. How does her jumping ability double as a weakness? You say she can jump UP TO ten feet in the air, did you mean she can ONLY jump that high? Because that's really the only way I can see it being a problem. If so that needs to be clarified. Also, we're not sure how having small paws is a weakness, you need to make that clearer as well. Just a piece of advice, but when you say "partially blind" you might specify how much or little she is able to see.

Just clear up these points and you should be set.
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Blue-Graphite Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
'Kay, hopefully it's better. Anything else?
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Much better, we just ask that you change the wording of the ability so that it's one or two complete sentences for the sake of clarity. Maybe word it as "She can jump ten feet in the air, but can't jump any lower than that. When she jumps she always goes ten feet up."

Just fix that and we can invite it to the group.
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Blue-Graphite Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is it okay, now?
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, that'll do.
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